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naruto is absorbing- part 1

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It was a typical day in the leaf village for the #1 knuckle-headed ninja: Naruto Uzumaki. The trees were blowing softly, the grass was green, the flowers were as open as they could be. This was a day ripe for some extreme training. Since Sasuke's betrayal of the leaf village two months ago, Naruto was obsessed with training, and was going at it frantically, trying to get in as much as he could, he eventually started to slack off in some of his D-rank missions (which, frankly was most of them) so that he could get in a few hours, here and there.

Since he had done some teary-eyed pleading to grandma Tsunade, he had gotten the day off to get a head start in his training. "Only this once" she said "but because you take leave for today, I'm gonna double your tasks for tomorrow, and rain or shine they'll get done." Although he was slightly shaken by grandma's (often to be very evil) punishment, he took the deal, what better day could there be to start training!

As he headed towards the training area, Naruto met Lee, who was also given leave for the day (but without Naruto's pleading involved). Of course, Naruto and Lee struck up a conversation immediately, but things started to be veeeeeeerrrrryy awkward when lee started to ramble on about Sakura. To try and smoothen things out, Naruto invited Lee to come and train with him, "Sure" said lee "and if I do not provide to be an adequate partner, I will do 1000 one-handed push ups" not even sure if that figure was even possible to match the exercise, Naruto and Lee rushed off to the training grounds to get a head start on what would be their hardest (and best) day of training ever!

They wasted no time in exercising when Naruto released 200 of his trademark shadow clones and immediately swarmed on Lee. When he couldn't handle anymore, the clones thought to just attack each other until Lee could recover enough to continue. They continued like this for 3 hours until neither of them could move, they had stopped for barely 5 minutes before Lee just said out loud "now that the warm up is finished when do we start?" Slightly taken aback, Naruto simply nodded and pushed himself up on his feet where he started his shuriken training. Running all over the place and throwing whatever tools he could use at specifically marked points across the dense forest of trees. Ii was a few minutes later when Lee appeared and started alongside Naruto. After a few hours a dozen near-missed, some scrapes, bruises and a few comical SPLAT!s into each other they were burned out.

They had both removed their shirts from all the workout and now lied right next to each other in the dense forest fast asleep, exhausted from their training. As Kiba was walking through the forest, he noticed the two asleep next to each other… without shirts…  He just stared for a few minutes and then walked away, muttering to himself "I'm not even gonna ask wtf is going on in this sick nut's head" (oh shit, I think he was talkin about me… well, this blows my cover <.<)

Two hours later they both woke up at the same time and bid each other farewell. Lee left for his house while Naruto stayed in the forest for a bit. Lost in his thoughts (or his version of it, whatever that may be…) a snide little voice coming from behind a tree called out to him "Hey, kid!"

"… What?"
"I see yous trainin hard fer sumthin, wanna gets a nice lil' shortcut"
(don't do it man…)
"Shut up!"
(sorry)
"Who are you talking to?"
"Uuuuh, no one kid. So, are yous interested"
"I dunno, what is it?"
"It's a VEEERY special … waddayacallem… techniques, ill give it to you cheap too, ill take half the cash in that froggy of yours and it's yours."
"Hmm, how do I know its not some scam! HUNH!"
"… my number's on the back, find me…"
"Oh… alright ill buy it"

After a few money exchanges, some yelling, bargaining and a few steal-money-but-got-smacked-over-the-head-after scenarios, the exchange was done. Now this newcomer had some cash and Naruto had the little scroll.

"alright, may as well tell you whats you gots there"
"whatever, this thing looks awesome!!"
"… ok… well, yous know that chakra is essentially yo energy and you smush it around, or whatevea."
"ya"
"so this lil' baby teaches you how to transform the energy comin at you into something that won't break your bones"
"it sounds awesome!!"
"well it is, heres the fun paart tho, if you learn it good enough, you can probably takes energy or chakra or whateva from anything, and use its."
"hold on, this thing helps me absorb chakra attacks, right?"
"in a nutshell, ya"
"so what if I absorb more then my usual limit"
"kid, I dunno and I don't care, I made my money so just go"
"alright see ya around!"

Naruto rushed as fast as he could to his room, anxious to try out this new technique. It dawned on naruto that this scroll may be the key to getting back Sasuke, if it did as promised. When he opened the scroll, he found that there were no hand signs to this, it was all an automatic absorption, apparently he jus needed to be specifically aware of all the energy around him, and mentally draw it forward. The moment he tried to do it he regretted being half-full in his chakra levels, he felt a huge rush of energy and he immediately filled up himself up and a little too much as well. He felt like a compressor was jammed in his stomach and turned on HIGH. He decided to turn in early and see if the pain went away when he would wake up.

But while he was asleep, Naruto's body was changing to accommodate his new chakra level. Since there was more energy inside him, his body expended a bit to keep itself from exploding. As it was fixing itself, his muscles grew in definition, his previously flat stomach started to form little dimples that later became a set of 6-pack abs, then his pectorals started to push out a bit more the usual, only an inch, but it was noticeable. Next, were his arms, as his arms just went from the usual thin-but-strong ninja arm to the not-so-thin-and-even-stronger arm. Then  his legs started pumping slowly, increasing in definition by the second, until every crease the was usually formed by muscle was visible, in total his quadriceps pushed out 4 inches and his calves went out by 3.

When his small growth was done, he looked more like an amateur body-builder then a ninja. But I'm sure he won't complain.


MORE TO COME… A LOT MORE!
my first mgs story. no significant mg in the first one, but there will be more to come :P

a bit of stuff that people wont mind in terms of languge, but the worst is something like "shut up". so i didnt bother with the warning

this is my start off point to what could have a few more parts to it. tell me if you guys like :P

in case: i do not own NARUTO, the copyright of the character belongs to Kishimoto Masashi
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flo463's avatar
no continuation? :( (Sad)